FORMAL LAB REPORTS
Technical writing should be clear, complete and consise. A good lab
report can be contained in a few pages of text (plus data).
You will be working in groups. You are expected to work together in the analysis, however,
you must write your own lab report. (This includes tables and graphs).
Text Format
- Text must be typed.
- Data tables must be typed.
- Double Space the text in the lab report.
The lab should be written in "past-tense".
Acceptable "We calibrated the oscilloscope after we took data."
Unacceptable "We calibrate the oscilloscope after we take data."
Lab Report Outline
Below is a required outline for "formal" lab reports.
Also listed is the grading system that will be used based on 65 total possible points..
| Cover Sheet: | Title | |
| | Author | |
| | Course | |
| | Lab Partners | |
| | Date | |
| I.
| Abstract
| 5 pts
|
| II.
| Background
| 10 pts
|
| III.
| Procedure
| 5 pts
|
| IV.
| Results & Analysis
| 20 pts
|
| V.
| Summary
| 5 pts
|
| VI.
| Data, Tables & Graphs
| 20 pts
|
|
|
| TOTAL POINTS
| 65 pts
|
Lab Report Content
Below is a description of what should be included in a full formal lab write-up.
- ABSTRACT
The abstract must be on a separate page by itself. It should be a
short paragraph that contains the following:
- clear, consise statement of purpose
- what the experiment did to study the issue
- summary of results - this includes quantitative results (numbers)
The abstract should be self-contained. For example, it should not refer to figures or graphs in
the report.
- DISCUSSION OF BACKGROUND
- Provide explanation on background physics as found in
places such as:
- lab write-up
- text books, library books
- instructor's lecture
- include references as necessary
- Provide discussion on how your experiment explores these
ideas and principles and/or tests some theory. Answer the
questions; Of what relevance is this specific lab to these
general ideas?, How will these ideas be studied and/or
tested?
- PROCEDURE
This section should be brief
- Like the rest of the report, this section must be a narrative (versus a "recipe" or list).
- describe the apparatus
Write this as if the reader has not seen the lab.
References to the lab manual are allowed, but, as with all of the report, use your own
words.
- Discussion of sigificant deviations from the procedures in the
lab manual or deviations from procedures given by the
instructor, or innovations introduced by the experimenter
This must include justifications for these changes.
- RESULTS & ANALYSIS
This is the mosts important section of the report. Most of
your effort should go into writing this section.
- discussion of data
- Verbally present the data found in your tables and figures
to the reader. That is, introduce every single table and figure
by number. State what the table or figure includes.
- Relate these data to
the goals of the experiment and background ideas being
studied. Address such issues as how the data compare
to what you expected to see from your understanding of
relevant concepts and theories. Reference tables and figure
specifically by table and figure numbers.
- Include a discussion of the sources of uncertainty in
your data and results. This discussion must address the
uncertainty in your measurements (which are listed in
the data tables). Comments about uncertainty in your
results must be supported by the data (rather than
simply specualtion on such things as friction or "human
error".)
- address any specific questions from the manual or instructor
and enumerate them where appropriate
- include equations and calculations where appropriate
Lengthy calculations are better suited to the data
section or an appendix.
- Contradicting statements are not acceptable.
One should read
over the report after it is written and look for contradicting
statements and resolve them in a new draft.
- Any conclusions about the experiment need to address
the data.
- address the data specifically:
"From our measurements of period for different amplitudes,
listed in table xxx, (and/or plotted in figure xxx), we
conclude..."
- state explicitly how you draw your conclusions from the
data:
"That the period depends on the length can be seen in
table xxx, where the period varies from xxx to xxx while the
length is changed from xxx to xxx..."
or
"From figure xxx one can see that the period depends on
the length. In the figure one can see the period is
smaller for smaller lengths. Furthermore the dependence
is non-linear as can be seen by the trend..."
- It is acceptable and proper to discuss ideas not
addressed by
the data as long as their relevance is made clear:
"One would expect that air friction would have an
effect on
the period. We suspect that different geometries and
mass densities of the pendulum bob will be effected by
friction according to..." "We were not able to draw
any significant conclusions about friction from our data.
As can be seen in table xxx, we used only two different
masses, both of which have the same radius. Their masses
did not differ enough to measure the predicted differences
in the periods (xxx s) given the errors shown in the
table."
- When comparing two numbers refer to the comparrison as
percent difference or discrepancy. Percent error is not
acceptable.
- SUMMARY
Summarize the lab and the most important results as they relate
to the stated purpose. Everthing in this paragraph must already have
been stated in earlier sections of the report. Add no new information in
this section. The summary can be done in a short paragraph.
- DATA, GRAPHS & TABLES
Follow all guidlines for Data, Tables and Graphs
1 POINT WILL BE SUBTRACTED FOR THE FOLLOWING REASONS
- excessive verbiage: In technical writing it is inappropriate to be less than clear, complete
and consise.
It is difficult to read and obtain information from technical writing, so
including flowery language or excessive words can be distracting and misleading.
- statements made, which are not supported by the data
- statements made, which use invalid arguments
- statements made about results, but without reference to the data.
For example, statements about trends seen in a plot of the data.
The author needs to explicitly explain how the data follows a trend
by referencing the plot and supporting data. Do not leave it to
the reader to make connections between your statements and your
data.
- contradicting statements - whether they are explicit in the text or
deducible from reading the text
- specific questions assigned by the instructor left unanswered
- idle speculation on sources of error and uncertainty (i.e.,
statements about error need to be backed up by data and/or
error analysis)
- reference to tables or figures without using the table and figure
numbers
- tables and figures which are not referred to in the text
Please note that is is possible to have more points deducted than the lab is worth.
1 POINT WILL BE ADDED FOR THE FOLLOWING REASONS
- Significant observations not called for in the manual or by the
instructor, but supported by the data and relevant to the goals
of the experiment
- Proposals for a better experiment.
These must address issues of significant improvements on the
method use and/or equipment. They must include details on how
and why the proposal is a significant improvement.